winter hearts

‘the father saved the mountain yonder,

i don’t suppose he was the one of yours,’

she said smiling before she froze

and turned an oily shade of rainbow

opalescent in her age of old

below they craved the market haunt

but through skins twilight kissed i called

down unto a sounding stained wood

thrust out instead of shore

this pain king rides swimming horse

dragging out to the dust of rain

in shattered wrists and waves’ refrain

underground calling all winter hearts

to strike in the below again


7 responses to “winter hearts”

  1. Veselin Avatar

    Nice choice of words. opalescent yonder thunder of silence

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks Veselin. Much appreciated!

      1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

        A slightly different style here, which I like. Poetry which hints at a more expansive story.

        1. michael raven Avatar

          Thank you, Chris. You know me: I like experimentation.

  2. Bob Avatar

    Let’s hope those winter hearts melt soon.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      No doubt. It’d be nice to get back out and about outside.

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