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  • everything falls apart — a serial

    04Oct26 | 12.19 CDT
    © 2026

    michael raven

    c: 261004.1219
    Photo by Sergei Vasilenko on Unsplash, design by michael raven

    Foreword III

    Saturday morning — well, closer to afternoon than morning by the time I dragged myself out of bed. There was that phone with the clock moving slowly across the screen like a new toy for the bored house cat that I was.

    I tapped the screen to life and gave a good long look at Miss Alice before the screen faded to black. I tapped the cracked surface again, glad that the spiderwebs were localized on Mister Handsome, with only a stray fissure touching Alice’s shoulder.

    Something about her eyes as they looked into the camera made me want to know more about someone who would abandon both car and phone. She didn’t have the look of someone who would just go with that kind of flow.

    Alice Donovan.

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    epistolary fiction, Minneapolis, serial fiction, serialized fiction, Twin Cities

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  • gasping

    04Oct26 | 08.27 CDT
    © 2026

    michael raven

    c: 261004.0827

    I can’t help but feeling a past has been stolen as the memories are further stained and fixed, put to slide, and transferred to meme.

    These memories are not my memories. Except when they are. With mendacity at every turn, what remains to be believed?

    Turn to left. Turn to the right. Beep beep. My vandal feet forget the steps, lose the center and free-fall once again.

    Where did we stow the missing link? Under the desks when we ducked and covered? Behind a flag carried from the alter? Listening at staircases, trying to stay undercover?

    Where did we stash that part?

    At lake bottoms, all of me sank — some never came up for air.

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    facets, fragments, writing

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    prose
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  • realize empty

    03Oct26 | 21.12 CDT
    © 2026

    michael raven

    c: 261003.2112

    I’m not quite sure what the point is anymore.

    What can you call it when you seek invisibility from yourself?

    Maybe there is only asking the moon before she covers her face behind Night’s wings.

    And then her only reply is to laugh.

    Cutting myself on get sickle edge, you then realize.

    empty

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    maps and legends

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    prose
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  • hidden in the crowd

    03Oct26 | 18.50 CDT
    © 2026

    michael raven

    c: 261003.1850
    a glance,
    hidden in the crowd
    you saw nothing
    i, everything
    i turned my face
    and let myself fade
    away

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    melancholia, poetry

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    poetry
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  • old things, these

    02Oct26 | 13.50 CDT
    © 2026

    michael raven

    c: 261002.1350
    slow touch the mirror
    broke silvered peeling
    stained memories
    grey to curl

    languish these hours
    waiting for a light
    to turn bare to glow
    swinging with
    bruised-wrist attics
    clotted in dust

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    poetry

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    poetry
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  • everything falls apart — a serial

    02Oct26 | 11.57 CDT
    © 2026

    michael raven

    c: 261002.1157
    Photo by Sergei Vasilenko on Unsplash, design by michael raven

    Foreword II

    I waited until I got settled in my apartment to give the phone a closer look.

    When I tried to turn the phone on, I got a whole lot of nothing aside from a flashing battery icon telling me the thing was out of juice in a critical way. No surprise there.

    When it finally charged enough to turn on, the corner of the screen read “Emergency calls only.” A large clock sat over a picture of a woman, the grey just beginning to show through dark, shoulder-length hair loosely tied in a small ponytail. Younger-looking than she probably was. Beautiful in a natural way, not made up or phony.

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    epistolary fiction, Minneapolis, serial fiction, serialized fiction, Twin Cities

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  • too tired

    01Oct26 | 21.29 CDT
    © 2026

    michael raven

    c: 261001.2129
    too tired for words
    fingers arthritic trees
    winter bare grey in
    winter brambled winds
    too tired to
    touch at distance with
    only scars cut to red

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    melancholia, poetry

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    poetry
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  • everything falls apart — a serial

    01Oct26 | 13.58 CDT
    © 2026

    michael raven

    c: 261001.1358
    Photo by Sergei Vasilenko on Unsplash, design by michael raven

    Foreword I

    This is not my story.

    I am only the momentary caretaker of the story. It is one of those stories that drops in someone’s lap without warning. Except, in my case, it made its appearance by being underfoot.

    A recent transplant to the Twin Cities, I had been warned by a friend that January and February were bitterly cold, and buses were less dependable on those frigid days. His advice: just buy a decent car and an engine block heater and plug the car in at night so it would start the next day. That way, he said, I wouldn’t find myself standing in twenty-below wind chills waiting for a bus that may or may not come.

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    epistolary fiction, Minneapolis, serial fiction, serialized fiction, Twin Cities

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    Everything Falls Apart
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  • Apologies for hiccups

    01Oct26 | 11.02 CDT
    © 2026

    michael raven

    c: 261001.1102

    I have decided to add some additional security measures to account for malicious bot activity on the site. If you are experiencing or have experienced 429 errors, that is due to those changes rolling in. Everything should settle down within the next 24 hours or sooner.

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    site details

    filed under:

    junk drawer
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  • Writing Journalism

    30Sep26 | 12.01 CDT
    © 2026

    michael raven

    c: 260930.1201

    Okay, just getting this out there:

    I do not envy journalists anymore. Not one bit.

    I’m sure it gets easier the more you do it, but I tried to write a fictional article for Everything Falls Apart and discovered that writing one following the styles set out for pieces of journalism breaks almost every single habit and rule of writing for poetry or fiction. Or even technical papers (which is part of my day job).

    It took me four hours to write <500 words, with multitudes of rewrites as I discovered in editing that I had slipped into the habits formed by writing fiction.

    My respect for copy-editors and journalists has gone upwards by a significant degree. It takes an entirely different mindset (for weak-minded me) to do what they do. And how!

    And — to be 100% transparent about the process — I suspect there are still places that it could be fine-tuned in the article.

    So, hats off to those folks. Their job is not a clear cut nor as easy as they make it look.

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    challenges, experimental, journalism, writing about writing

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    writing
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