acid rain

unfolding origami
i wonder if
gum foil unicorns
feel forgotten
before becoming
crushed straw dogs
underfoot while
acid rain lovers
slip down the drain

next time, i say
leave all folds
in place

7 responses to “acid rain”

  1. missparker0106 Avatar

    Hey Michael–tried to post my impressions on The Gift of Not Belonging…but comments are not available. Please email me and I’ll let you know what I thought.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      I was having someone for a while trying to spam old comments with gambling links, so I shut them down after 14 days. The person seems to have relented, so I’ve opened it back up. Try again. If it doesn’t work, I’ll reach out because I’m interested in your thoughts.

      1. missparker0106 Avatar

        I went back and refreshed….still no reply button.

        1. michael raven Avatar

          That’s because the website manager is an idiot and forgot to SAVE the change allowing comments. Imma gonna fire that guy if he doesn’t shape up. Let me know and THIS time if it doesn’t work I’ll just shoot you an email. Sorry about that.

  2. Bob Avatar

    acid rain lovers
    slip down the drain

    Nice!

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks Bob 😊