burning low

i so ghost the slip/fade
the lips, they move
the words, they say
lost to the flux/shift
miming animal faces
in heavy rains

it is only echo, right?
i ask night burning low

5 responses to “burning low”

  1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    And our voices are but whispers in the maelstrom.
    This resonates.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Oooh! Nice rejoinder. I LIKE it.

      1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

        Feel free to take it and bounce something back 🙂

        1. michael raven Avatar

          Now, if only I could write. 🤔