bury

i would bury myself,
your warmth rising around
if i could but find you
adrift within the dream

9 responses to “bury”

  1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    The beauty of a dream.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Life is but a dream.

  2. Bob Avatar

    Feels like one of those dreams you’d wake up with a sense of awe and loss at the same time. Well done.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      The loss is sometimes in the waking. Everything was just fine before that 😊

  3. lyndhurstlaura Avatar

    So few words to express such intense longing.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      I’ve lots of practice at longing 😂

  4. The Creative Chic Avatar

    your words are so beautiful, if only we could dream longer than we do.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you Jennifer.

      I might never wake up if given the choice, lolol. 😊