chaos

woke up tired
washed up
dragged down
undertow and gone
rip tide out away
from shore
past jagged
black stones
piercing waves
and the ocean
it pulled me
so far away
until i approached
a ninth wave

i woke up tired
washed up
not needing their
chaos riding home

7 responses to “chaos”

  1. Bob Avatar

    You’ve captured that chaos feeling here. A lot of that going round lately.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      I think of the “Ball of Confusion” cover by Love and Rockets in relation to our current events.

      1. Bob Avatar

        Good call. I’ll be putting that song on now.

        1. michael raven Avatar

          It feels appropriate. Enjoy.

  2. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    Nice turn at the end of this piece, Michael.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you very much Chris.

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