dawn

back against metal
frost skin bruised
waiting for the sun

concrete chipped cuts
those nylon nerves
screaming for the sun

i love you like
you don't love me while
dawning before the sun

2 responses to “dawn”

  1. tara caribou Avatar

    I feel this one.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you Tara. 💙

      Hope it isn’t too closely…