first kiss

[response]

stone raven black
her slow hand turns
on the moon
in lace and silhouette
waiting on dusk
to kiss me
a bridge closer home,
ever to her side

[call]

Laughing into the fire
Is it always like this?
Flesh and blood and the first kiss
The first colors, the first kiss

~ Siamese Twins

michael raven

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2 responses to “first kiss”

  1. chrisnelson61 Avatar
    chrisnelson61

    I like this, and the idea of the call/response.
    Oh, and of course, I love the song!

    Reply
    1. michael raven Avatar
      michael raven

      Thanks Chris.

      I’m in a bit of a mood from that era of the band’s music. I suppose that’s why it filtered in. 🙂

      Reply

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