games they play

i hate these games they play, i
start cutting up the words
start cutting up the pieces
and stare with heroin eyes
smudged and kohl, waiting with
torn fishnets gutter drenched

i teardrop the rain and ruin
waiting for the day you
feel these barbed wire kisses
humming on the wind
for the day you understand
the words i cut to pieces
with steel from heroin eyes

11 responses to “games they play”

  1. lodestarwytch Avatar

    Very nice writing – you can feel the contempt for “drama” dripping from the words! Powerful piece

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you. You are very kind. 💙

  2. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    Wow! Impactful. Hints of lack of empathy here.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks Chris 😉

  3. erroneouschoices Avatar

    This feels perfect and actually like my day I’m having actually.

    Also, you have a gorgeous way with words

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you. Glad you liked it. Sorry your day feels like this. I sympathize. 😢

      1. erroneouschoices Avatar

        It’s not that bad, I’m sorry, just expressing 🙂 I’m good. It’s always nice to read others and find relativity

        1. michael raven Avatar

          A-ha! Sorry I misunderstood. Thanks again.

  4. lyndhurstlaura Avatar

    ‘barbed wire kisses … steel from heroin eyes’: incredible, sharp imagery. 🙂

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you Laura. There’s risk in such things, which might be their appeal, I expect. 😉

      1. lyndhurstlaura Avatar

        It works, at any rate. 😎