Half-Penny Thoughts — 04sept26

What’s with this trend I am seeing of writers who publish Kindle-first books of giving superfluous subtitles to their work?

Or has it always been around at this frequency and I am only now noticing it? I am well aware that the idea of using a superfluous subtitle in of itself is not a new thing, but when this month’s offerings of “free” Kindle books for Prime customers are littered with subtitles that make no sense to add, I have some head scratching going on inside my skull.

“Title: A Novel“

“Title: A Thriller“

“Title: A Historical Romance“

“Title: A Horror Story“

In every case, the subtitle doesn’t add to the title, but arguably subtracts from it. The subtitle describes the book’s genre/subgenre, it doesn’t create an narrative atmosphere in any way.

My terrible webnovel I wrote back on 1999-2005 (it is so awful I can’t even quote from most of it), was really the only time I considered giving a novel a subtitle in this vein, and that’s because I intended to file it under horror/fantasy. “Drifter: A Love Story”. The suggestion of romance was a dissonance for horror/fantasy before urban fantasy took the idea and ran with it.

I hesitated and debated using “thought + memory” for my book of poetry, “galdr“. I wanted to hint at Huginn and Munnin (Odin’s twin ravens), and I purposefully added a “+” over an “&” or “and”, and there are some days that I wonder if it would have been better to leave the title unadorned as “galdr” and let everyone try to figure it out what it meant to them for themselves.

I’m just trying to figure out if there is a purpose in adding a subtitle that adds nothing to a title, or if it is just ego wanting to say: “Look, I published A Novel. It even says so on the cover, right next to my name!”

Drop your thoughts below and enlighten a cantankerous old fuddy-duddy. Or another word that starts with the letter “f”.


16 responses to “Half-Penny Thoughts — 04sept26”

  1. lodestarwytch Avatar

    Everything seems to get dumbed down to an insulting degree these days. Give it time and it will probably also be labelled as a book first too! 🤣

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Jaysus, you’re onto something. Just wait until they discover semicolons in titles:

      “Book; How to Read: A Self-Help Book”

      🤦‍♂️

  2. Ari Avatar

    how else are you supposed to know what that is she says sarcastically

    1. michael raven Avatar

      It might be a doorstop. But, because it says “…A Novel”, we now know it isn’t!

  3. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    Who Killed Cock Robin?: A mystery; a murder – who done it.
    Contains words which may form sentences.
    PLUS a beginning, middle AND a ending

    1. michael raven Avatar

      I said the Sparrow, with my bow and arrow.

      Who Killed Cock Robin: True Crime.

      1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

        🤣 Ha! Now you spoiled the ending of a 350 page novel!

        1. michael raven Avatar

          The spoiler tags didn’t work? Dammit! 😂

  4. sopantooth Avatar

    I assume it’s an SEO thing. I don’t much about much, but I know SEO is the new god

    1. michael raven Avatar

      I suppose…?

      Granted, it is an ebook, but you should do SEO on your promotional post, not your ebook.

      But you’re probably right.

      Please shoot me.

      1. sopantooth Avatar

        I don’t point a pistol at nobody mister

  5. shredbobted Avatar

    My guess is it’s trendy and most folks are sheep. I have wondered at the title of your collection; thanks for explaining it!

    1. michael raven Avatar

      It was a play on those concepts at the time as some pieces were true memories (memory) and others personal reflection (thought). There was also the echo to the ravens for Michael Raven. Plus, I wanted to ground the Old Norse word with English to take away some of the implication of mysticism in the writing. AI still has my book categorized as Heathen when it is nothing of the sort. Silly algorithms.

      You’re probably right, although for the life of me I can’t see an obvious point to the trend. Instead of suggesting quality, a generic title with a generic subtitle feels like it suggests the opposite.

      Then again, no one really asked for my opinion on the matter. 😂

  6. moppermijmer Avatar

    My instinct is that there is a current of people that will need this little tibit to recognise a book as being a novel or a informative book before picking it up. Not out of stupidity, just that our attention spans and searching skills have been fried by modern tech. You want a novel so you look for the word novel.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      I suspect you are right to some degree, and it shares some DNA with sopantooth’s comment about SEO.

      The problem is: if everyone uses this tactic for those reasons, then using it as SEO or a search tactic is quickly overwhelmed by useless, or near-useless, returns on a search. “A Novel” is not novel enough to differentiate one book from another unless it is something like “SEO for Dummies: A Novel” (fiction) versus “SEO for Dummies: How to get your book seen” (slightly less fiction). That usage case makes more sense. Instead, it becomes yet another part of the background noise that you have to filter out.

      Thanks for the comment, it got me to thinking about possible motives that I hadn’t considered.

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