hibiscus

tart hibiscus on my tongue
returns memories of stolen kisses
over doumbek & warmed rania
while thick windows
full of commuting crowds
rush to beat the thicker snowflakes
falling on rescue red buses
roaring past to carry them home

4 responses to “hibiscus”

  1. lyndhurstlaura Avatar

    That brings back the taste of hibiscus! Thanks for sharing. 🙂

    1. michael raven Avatar

      You’re welcome and thank you 🙏🏼

  2. Bob Avatar

    Fantastic imagery.