Hollowman

I’ve gone hollow, with dusty cobwebs occupying the empty space inside. If you were to loosen the black leather lacing that holds everything inside, you would be surprised at the void that greets you.

I don’t want you to be shocked. So, consider this fair warning if you elect to look inside just out for the looking for any curiosities you thought might be tied up inside. Some other thief or thieves have already lifted the everything of what used to reside there.

Ahh, is that disappointment I perceive? That long, gravity-trapped face dragging to the ground, where once a smile was to reside, turned to the upside down?

It’s not my preference to be primarily hollow, I assure you. My clockwork heart was quite the thing, I promise, before it was taken from me. Even the spleen filled of ideal was taken from me. I am quite empty, you see.

With all parts cannibalized for the sake of entertainment of others, only my eyes remain to reflect the void within. Waiting for something that long has a been and unlike to be again.


4 responses to “Hollowman”

  1. lodestarwytch Avatar

    Hauntingly captivating – you certainly have a way with words Michael 🌹

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you! Much appreciated. 💙

  2. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    A very relatable piece of prose, Michael. Our perception is, perhaps, that everybody else is full of wonder which makes us feel the more hollow. Maybe all we see is projections of what we’d like to see and, in reality, all are as hollow as we?

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Eliot comes to mind…

      We are the hollow men
      We are the stuffed men
      Leaning together
      Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!
      Our dried voices, when
      We whisper together
      Are quiet and meaningless

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