slow break

Photo by Kevin Hessey on Unsplash
my slow break echoes
through and through
an empty world
timber splintered decay

how long the weary
before even weary
must fall down?

pale songs cut
our rebel selves

4 responses to “slow break”

  1. Bob Avatar

    That last stanza is hits home.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you very much, Bob.

  2. Ray Van Horn, Jr. Avatar

    I’m with Bob. We’re all in good company how music affects us, how it should be, with integrity, balking when it does not.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      One day I’ll write a good song 😉

      Maybe it will be like my death poem kind of thing so it is all romantragic like that.