slumberinthat

chilldaycrawl
intobedcavegrey
turnofftheworld
sleepysadweary
slumberinthatplace
wherethereis
notevenme

10 responses to “slumberinthat”

  1. Bob Avatar

    Those cold days are coming when you don’t want to get out of your warm bed.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      That’s most days lately.

  2. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    Yes, I like the structure of this – makes one focus on what is really going on in your writing.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks Chris. I was trying to emulate muttering in a visual manner.

      1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

        Yes, and muttering to ones self often makes much sense.

        1. michael raven Avatar

          At least when I mutter to myself, it is often an audience that mostly listens. Except when it doesn’t…

          1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

            …which is usually when it should!

          2. michael raven Avatar

            Sadly, my self can be rather obstinate at times.

  3. Sharon's Writers Tidbits Avatar

    Sounds cosy AND reflective!