turning out

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a face i wore before
now put upon a shelf
uncertain bare self
raw and scrubbed clear of
façades once dear to me

i scribble, unknowing
becoming senseless with age
forget i once claimed to write
what i spill to ink
has become mystery

reach for the pullchain, please,
and turn out the light

15 responses to “turning out”

  1. Mae Faurel Avatar

    Hmm, Michael.. Still thinking about this one! This holds such truth. We all wear faces for a time, and when they’re set aside, what’s left can feel raw but also real. Mystery in the ink isn’t failure, it’s life speaking in a deeper tongue. Sometimes turning out the light is just the beginning of seeing differently🧡

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks for your thoughts. 💙

      It’s quite nice not having to wear any masques, if only for short spells. Embracing unknowing…

  2. lyndhurstlaura Avatar

    No masks needed anymore when we’re going into the dark. Theme of the week? 🙂

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Perhaps. Unconscious theme. Or simply muddled thinking. 😅

      1. lyndhurstlaura Avatar

        A meaningful piece, whatever the thinking behind it. Have a good week. 🙂

        1. michael raven Avatar

          Thanks, Laura. You have a good week as well.

  3. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    Really like this piece, Michael. Different faces for different places.
    Question: with age to we lose connection to our true face?

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Seems most likely about the time we have left the womb.

      1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

        Probably true.

  4. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    Truly a thought provoking piece, Michael. Well done!
    🙌🏽

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you!🙏🏼

  5. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    loved your poem, Michael~!
    💓

      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

        You betcha! 🙌🏽