underneath

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the peopling ages raw
meat hook hanging
— don't pretend to kiss me,
this savage morning hurts

let me dance the razor's edge
the deaf talk my broken digits
the blind point my way home

underneath, i weary stone

2 responses to “underneath”

  1. shredbobted Avatar

    I think this is showing some of what you’re searching for; the syntax deepens the piece.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks Ted. 🙂