unmoored

my mind is on the drift   and
i cannot find the will     to
moor it anymore,      perhaps
i will butterfly      instead

4 responses to “unmoored”

  1. Stacey C. Johnson Avatar
    Stacey C. Johnson

    ooooh. “butterfly” as verb. Somehow you always manage to make these awesome choices in such an offhand way that they leave me both delighted and wondering why I never thought to do it before, as you use it it a way that seems to gesture that this is obviously the only word for this particular sensibility. Love this, Michael!

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you Stacey. I’ve been trying to trust my intuitive self as a writer more often. I think that might be the source of those happy little accidents 😊

  2. erroneouschoices Avatar

    Gorgeous unexpected ending

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you. I’m glad I was able to catch you off-guard 😊

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