wild horse

with talons in scalp & neck
with gravel voice inside head
black blade scraping skull
within red cedar rising tall...
someone rode their wild horse
& that someone was not me

11 responses to “wild horse”

  1. Chico’s Mom Avatar

    The title of your poem sent me here;

    https://youtu.be/nY_GgPi5eCM?si=mZ2EkQVn-k7eppzV

    I know. My mind is a scary place.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Not so scary. 😂

      I was half-expecting a link to the U2 song, but this one is reasonable. Now, if you linked to American Woman… I’d have to scratch my head a little.

        1. michael raven Avatar

          Thank goodness it wasn’t the Butthole Surfers’ version LMAO. Lenny’s is okay.

          1. Chico’s Mom Avatar

            I don’t know that version. 🤔

          2. michael raven Avatar

            They had a few songs near the end that got radioplay, but their American Woman was in the height of their experimental stage and most people wouldn’t recognize it as a cover song, it’s THAT deconstructed. Kind of like putting David Lynch movies into a blender and seeing what pours out.

  2. Veselin Avatar

    Reminds me of a dragon

    1. michael raven Avatar

      I can see how you might think that. Thanks!

  3. Bridgette Avatar

    The last line got me.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      🙏 thank you Bridgette.

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