all we need know

standing stones
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she is twin crests
her rivers run free
that is all we
need know

she is the green
her cleft draws in
into the womb
under cairn

stone is all that matters
all words just
nattering on like
whispers on wind

she is wellspring
that is all
we need know

12 responses to “all we need know”

  1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    Wonderful piece.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you Chris.

  2. shredbobted Avatar

    I like “nattering on” reminds me of a Neil Young cut

      1. shredbobted Avatar

        Oh man. It’s a bootleg of Long May You Run from the H.O.R.D.E. Festival (I think, and whatever that is) where somebody asks him to sing “Old King” and he says he can’t because he forgot his banjo and then goes into this whole spiel about if you think he’s longwinded now you should have heard him in the old days at The Riverboat where he would only play like three songs a set and then the rest of the time he was just “nattering away” Freaking hilarious.

        1. michael raven Avatar

          Sounds like Todd, except he’d play nearly as much as he talked when I saw him live.

          1. shredbobted Avatar

            Yeah I enjoy Todd Snider’s stories as much as I enjoy his songs, and they’ve led me to some really great stuff. I actually read Lawrence Durrell’s Alexandria Quartet because of Todd Snider, in a roundabout way.🙂

          2. michael raven Avatar

            How a banana will help if you’ve dropped too much acid is one of his best tales. 🤣

            But, the “purple” versions of his albums are classic Snider. More podcast than album, he plays through each of the songs on the album, but with lengthy stories between the songs about the story behind them or whatever goes through his head while he’s “nattering on”.

          3. shredbobted Avatar

            😎My favorite is “The Ballad of the Devil’s Backbone Tavern” off Near Truths and Hotel Rooms. And “John Prine” from Storyteller

          4. michael raven Avatar

            I’ll have to refresh my memory of those, it’s been a long spell.

            I mean, he’s nearly more storyteller than singer/songwriter and I haven’t heard many duds yet.

          5. shredbobted Avatar

            “Life is hard, gettin thru
            Everybody’s gonna make it tough on you
            But I’ll tell you right now if you love what you do
            They’ll never get you down”