antlers stand silent

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my hands carry scenes
from a different winter
stiff with memories
yet to come

blood crust blades the snow
windswept carved the land
why only the never?
antlers stand silent of stone

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6 responses to “antlers stand silent”

  1. lyndhurstlaura Avatar
    lyndhurstlaura

    Very atmospheric writing. Love it. 😎

    1. michael raven Avatar
      michael raven

      Thanks!

  2. Bob Avatar
    Bob

    You captured this desolate feeling. “stiff with memories / yet to come” great line!

    1. michael raven Avatar
      michael raven

      My melancholy is showing 😉

      Thanks!

  3. chrisnelson61 Avatar
    chrisnelson61

    ‘with memories
    yet to come’
    Excellent line – wonderful sense of the melancholy of fate. Great piece, Michael.

    1. michael raven Avatar
      michael raven

      Thank you very much, Chris.

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