ashen

we wore our hearts
in sticker on
polyester sleeve
while whale bone
held us to north
and nightfall

— waiting
for ghost-trees
to give over and
bring blood home
cellophane crackling
under our feet of
cruel winters

ashen, for that is
how we lost our
home

6 responses to “ashen”

  1. Bob Avatar

    Love the imagery. Those ghost-trees especially.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks! That was one of my own favorite lines when I was done.

  2. Bridgette Avatar

    Lovely sensory details like the cellophane crackling.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you Bridgette 🙏

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks, Jenn. I think it is one of my better efforts of late.