echo dream

i can't help but wonder
when you talk,
if you talk to me
or if that is just dream
speaking past soft veils

perhaps it is just a dream
echoing another dream
in which there is nothing
but a dream left for
anything to say

4 responses to “echo dream”

  1. erroneouschoices Avatar

    I love love the imagery you’ve given us with this

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you very much. 💕

  2. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    I think that there exists an element of trust here – we believe that words between us echo understanding …otherwise, what’s the point.
    Very poetically put, Michael.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you Chris. You’re not wrong.

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