gasps

deadwood slips to view
grown of long hand fingers
to cling at granite grey
under endless feathered blue

it is bones these ways
there, under the burn

just a kiss away
twine knotted taut
gives over to memories
gone to flint faded wine
under gasps of sand

6 responses to “gasps”

  1. steveforthedeaf Avatar

    Like that a lot

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks! Glad it hit the spot.

  2. Bridgette Avatar

    “gasps of sand” is soo good.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks! Much appreciated.🙂

  3. Bob Avatar

    Excellent. “under gasps of sand” …such a great line.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks Bob 🙂