her rain

under her folds
her hands
her rain

under her under
returns her rains
again

she follows rain
books upon books
entry upon entry

fusty future histories
after her storm
rain rain her rain

6 responses to “her rain”

  1. shredbobted Avatar

    Welcome back, Michael. How was the trip?

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Still on the trip but on the last leg before heading home. It’s been an educational experience in a number of ways, some of it internal. Externally, I enjoyed the scenery more further away from home. The last couple days, even in Canada, were too much like driving through the five state area around Minnesota for my liking, with the monotony broken up in small spurts. There’s a lot of highways lined with exclusively with crops, let me tell you…

  2. Stefan Avatar
    Stefan

    I like the ambiguity in this one but also just nice to read

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks Stefan, much appreciated.

  3. Bob Avatar

    I love how this washes over me. And the line “fusty future histories” is fantastic!

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you very much Bob. Glad you liked that line. It was one of “those” lines that I wasn’t sure how or might be received.