of wilds

michael raven

a path in the middle of a dark forest
Photo by Wes Hicks on Unsplash

Previously posted on sceadugenga.com on 18mar25. Reposted with audio.

going back to the real
hands smudged black
and dirt under nails
gravel yellow crush
i listen at forests for
wisdom crowing loud
leave to crowds where
crowds are wont to go

enough of deaf gods mute
i am not what they need

left to wending paths
through silent sentinels
gone to follow the call

13 responses to “of wilds”

  1. Michele Lee Avatar

    Great job with your audio! πŸŽ™οΈ πŸ‘πŸ»

    “leave to crowds where
    crowds are wont to go”

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you, Michele. This was recorded with a mobile device and then underwent some minor edits in Audacity (normalization, moving title/author from end to front, noise reduction and reverb).

      I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much. πŸ’™

      1. Michele Lee Avatar

        You’re welcome and thank you for sharing a bit of the process. I haven’t recorded anything in a while. Missing that. Your poetry lends itself to the spoken word. Thank you! πŸ’›πŸ‘πŸ»

        1. michael raven Avatar

          Thank you [blushes].

          You should get back to it, I enjoy listening to your recordings.

          1. Michele Lee Avatar

            I definitely will. Thank you very much. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»

  2. flytheraven Avatar

    So intimate. I love this, Michael. Very cool.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you Raven. It was a fun little production for when I had fifteen or so minutes of just hanging out. I’ll have to do more of these.

      1. flytheraven Avatar

        I hope you do. That would be fantastic!

  3. Violet Lentz Avatar

    I enjoyed this as a reading and it was wonderful.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you very much! πŸ’™

  4. Bob Avatar

    I loved the reading. And the second stanza is fantastic. I enjoyed this very much.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      I appreciate it Bob. Thank you. It’s great to know that second stanza resonates with someone other than myself. Glad you liked it.