otherside

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i wonder at the fog that
obscures all thinking
dancing ghosts away
from dream

all the lies, all the lies of me
i feel a new sobriety
washing over

another wall showing cracks?
what awaits the otherside?

11 responses to “otherside”

  1. Bob Avatar

    Very cool. Breaking through the fog, the lies…to another more sober self.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Perhaps. It feels like progress, but may be just another distraction.

      1. Bob Avatar

        The self as another layer. Gets you thinking, what’s under that.

        1. michael raven Avatar

          I suspect not as much as I have put stock in 🙂

          1. Bob Avatar

            Haha. I’m in the same boat.

  2. Ray Van Horn, Jr. Avatar

    Transformative with a hanging question mark.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Gotta see what happens first 😉

  3. shredbobted Avatar

    What indeed?

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Probably some eldritch horror. Just my luck.

      1. shredbobted Avatar

        The quickening

        1. michael raven Avatar

          There can only be one.