shards, i

In singsong:

don't dare imagine
don't dare dream
don't dare be strange,
dirty or obscene

12 responses to “shards, i”

  1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    Ha, humorous piece that sums up the idea of maintaining the status quo. Keep dreaming!

    1. michael raven Avatar

      I expected this piece to go further. But then it didn’t. I liked it and it seemed a shame to bin it, so I left it as a fragment.

      1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

        Sometimes enough is enough.

  2. steveforthedeaf Avatar

    Awww. But I wanna

    1. michael raven Avatar

      You dirty little man…

      I see why we get along.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Shh! They’ll find out if you’re so loud.

      😉

      1. Chico’s Mom Avatar

        😂 How does that saying go? “Well behaved women rarely make history.”

        1. michael raven Avatar

          😂 Well then, best start misbehaving.

  3. Bridgette Avatar

    It feels like there’s an implied, “unless…” at the end.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      If I finish this one, it might need to include it.