shards, iv

these steel cut shores
carved in black sand
whisper hush of tides
and heavy of storms.

'black rain comes.'
more slight than whisper,
more ragged than thorn.

hand grasps of hand,
lingers as wraiths
for which are known.

7 responses to “shards, iv”

  1. Bridgette Avatar

    The two lines starting with “more than” are so haunting.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you Bridgette 🙏

  2. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    No matter how tightly you hold on, the black rain will find you.
    Great piece, Michael.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      I think there is a little storm cloud that follows me around and around wherever I might roam.

      1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

        Not necessarily a bad thing, though…

        1. michael raven Avatar

          Does put off the folks down at the laundromat a bit.

          “Oh bother! We just took these out of the dryer, now I’ll have to get more coins to run them again.”