shedding

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we glide fields
wend the trees
crest the tor and
stretch wide mouths
to sing

this unpeopling
of ourselves celebrates
forest fires burning
inside our chests,
shriven

without names
these nature gods
shove hours aside
giving all to
heartwood

shed the wire
marking barbed against
soft flesh
and fly…

6 responses to “shedding”

  1. Bob Avatar

    Excellent. Especially, “unpeopling / of ourselves” It’s renewing getting away from all that is familiar.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      I agree. Sometimes it is helpful to forget.

  2. tara caribou Avatar

    Absolutely love this one. I feel it.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you, Tara 💙

  3. Michele Lee Avatar

    I concur with Bob – excellent poem and phrase. 🔥

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you very much Michele 💙