tangled christine &
soldiers marching tin
on shadows & smoke
with eyes casting stars
--how bright they are
a shower glittershines down
tangled
5 responses to “tangled”

Like a battle. I see a hail of fire arrows over them- beauty before death and rebirth. Lovely, Michael.

Thank you, Raven. I like your interpretation. 🙂

You’re welcome, Michael.

I’ve gotta say-this seems like a beautiful description, but I think it sounds ominous

There is always the potential for danger when it comes to beauty, don’t you think?

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