seething a steel spike
to shatter ice, to
strike sparks to stone
sever sinew & send
a tattoo to bone
pierce mine eyes
so the seeing can begin
shh tell no one this lullaby it is our secret to own welcome to this razor wire
to shatter ice
7 responses to “to shatter ice”
Effective use alliterative ‘s’. Love it. 😎
Thank you. I probably shouldn’t admit that I only noticed I had done that while I was editing it prior to hitting the publish button. 😂
It works well though. Reading it out loud gives a great effect. 🙂
Thank you. 🙏
Great piece to hear out loud (well I my head anyway!). Flows really well.
Thank you Chris. Out loud in the head is probably the loudest anyone should hear most of my writing… 😂
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