turning away

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like wild horses
before the storm
here comes the
turning away

we have heard all
those plots before and
i am caring less
what your gods
have to say

i unbind knots
that blind stained eyes
and give over to both
the bone and the stone

crashing down
like a waterfall
when comes the
turning away

10 responses to “turning away”

  1. shredbobted Avatar

    Have a good walkabout, sir! I will await your return.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you. I have airport boredom ahead. Likely more doggerel ahead.

      1. shredbobted Avatar

        Can’t wait. I write good in airports and on airplanes. Can’t do shit anywhere else on vacation. Nor should you, if you don’t want.

        1. michael raven Avatar

          I may and I may not. I’ll be driving most of the time, which will cut into any writing I might do. As always, I tend to let it happen or not on its own. And there is the kvetching with my companion before hitting the hay as well. 🙂

          1. shredbobted Avatar

            Just out of curiosity, do you know which song Westerberg was talking about when he said “I’m in love with that song?” It’s easily findable on Wikipedia. I was a little stunned by how good it is.

          2. michael raven Avatar

            I never worried too much about it, honestly. I’ll have to take a gander at it when I am able. Thanks for the suggestion

          3. shredbobted Avatar

            I could tell you but I’ll just let you search if you want to. Could just be my rabbit hole, and I don’t know your feelings on Big Star. I’m guessing you’re a fan of Alex Chilton, at least through his production work with the Cramps and his guitar on “Pleased to Meet Me.” And Kanga Roo certainly seems right up your alley, as well as the covers by This Mortal Coil. Anyhoo . . . have a great road trip!!

          4. michael raven Avatar

            So far so good

  2. Bob Avatar

    Fantastic. The second stanza really stands out for me.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you Bob 🙂