waterdown

we wander broken edge
only she knows full this waterdown
and i am always guessing

facewashing frenzy, poison years
and to quench the fevers raging
a mountain in skywater chill

she sings the dusk at waterdown
stepping past all edges
and i am left again guessing

4 responses to “waterdown”

  1. erroneouschoices Avatar

    Stepping past all the edges, favorite line. Love the inspiration

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you very much. 💙

  2. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    Love this word! Great imagery here.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you, Chris.