winternight

a blue face glowing
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crack hands old oak
wrapped around my love
i hollow the heartwood
until she slips inside
she comes the winter
she comes the night
she comes the winternight

pinpricks my body torn
needles dance my arms
we sickle under midmoon
white kissed before we're born
she comes the winter
she comes the night
she comes winternight

8 responses to “winternight”

  1. Michele Lee Avatar

    Your poems invite a read aloud and always create vivid imagery. ✨

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank-you Michele. I should probably do more recorded readings. But then I’d have to listen to the sound of my own voice 😂

      1. Michele Lee Avatar

        You’re very welcome, Michael. Don’t be so hard on yourself. It’d be great! 🙌🏻 I just did a practice one.

  2. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    Great imagery here, Michael.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks Chris. 🐦‍⬛

  3. Ray Van Horn, Jr. Avatar

    Luscious, and as I commented previously, methinks you’re in a wintry frame of mind.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      I’m ready for autumn. Apparently, so are most of the stores. Halloween stuff already! Wow.