Stolen away

There are days that I feel like everything was stolen away. Like today. A flash of stagelighting splashed on chrome, showering us in cobalt bright and cherry gone to burgundy under the finger tap tap tap. There was sweat, laughter and I fell in love that night, but there was not enough summer to keep.

Those moments were before the things broke and I fell to the stolen, poisoned under a trail of stars.

We danced. How we danced. Different voice, a skew of face. Keeping the faith and spinning, yearning there on the eve of May. Michael, you said, a vampire drawing, drinking me away from the night. Be one of us of us of us…

And I turned before the fading, blinded again with white. I should have not gone into the light because that it where it started to break. The theft in your obsidian eyes, a box containing all the light and the smell of the waterfront. Distracted by the glitter, I forgot to forget and give over.

Maybe, I should have let the dead die.

Tired of the absence, I slender eyes to shadow. I ache for the heart in your voice. But now only echoes sing in the empty place where everything was stolen away.


15 responses to “Stolen away”

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you, Sharon 🙏‍‍

  1. lyndhurstlaura Avatar

    Heartbreak in beautiful language. 😪

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks, Laura 🙏

  2. steveforthedeaf Avatar

    Time is a thief. Memory the bringer of the sweetest gifts

    1. michael raven Avatar

      True enough, true enough.

  3. Bob Avatar

    Beautiful. Really like the form, if I may call it prose poetry.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thanks Bob. You are welcome to name it as you see fit. I wouldn’t be offended 🙂

  4. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    A wonderful slice of poetic prose, Michael. I really like your style in this – great melancholic nostalgia without the self-pity.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      The more I think of it, there are only actions and consequence. I don’t know that there is room for self-pity.

      Thanks you, Chris.

      1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

        You make a good point. Not always easy to escape the quicksand though!

        1. michael raven Avatar

          Definitely not. Practice makes perfect?

          1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

            Ha. One would like to think so, but…

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