tall naked trees

dead souls, we
wraith through
tall naked trees
under winter iron
to our cold fires
waiting

someone whispers
the name you wore
before you were born

perhaps, even,
it was i

recall, rejoin these
dead souls, we
that may seek again
as we wraith through
winter's tall naked
trees

10 responses to “tall naked trees”

  1. chrisnelson61 Avatar

    ‘They keep calling me.’
    Great imagery here, Michael. Particularly like the second stanza.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Should have known you would catch that 😅

      Thank you!

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you Sharon 🙏

      1. Sharon's Writers Tidbits Avatar

        You are very welcome, Michael! 🥰

  2. Bridgette Avatar

    The name before, I love that idea and the mood of this poem. It feels like it belongs in an epic story.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      I’ll admit that Beowulf has been on my mind of late. It might come from there.

  3. JL Collins Avatar

    A quiet, haunted piece,

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you 🙏