tangled

tangled christine &
soldiers marching tin
on shadows & smoke
with eyes casting stars
--how bright they are
a shower glittershines down

5 responses to “tangled”

  1. flytheraven Avatar

    Like a battle. I see a hail of fire arrows over them- beauty before death and rebirth. Lovely, Michael.

    1. michael raven Avatar

      Thank you, Raven. I like your interpretation. 🙂

      1. flytheraven Avatar

        You’re welcome, Michael.

  2. shredbobted Avatar

    I’ve gotta say-this seems like a beautiful description, but I think it sounds ominous

    1. michael raven Avatar

      There is always the potential for danger when it comes to beauty, don’t you think?